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Submitted: June 18, 2009
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A.M. - Logoby `Lilyas

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Thanks for your great feedback and support on this design! I now did some changings on the "A" to make it more standing out. I think it's better now. The black and white versions will be flat and without textures.
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This is a commissioned logo for *mimico1981, I was asked to do the initials "AM" in purple and pink. This is what I came up with. Feedback is much appreciated!

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Critique by ~SpazzyDragon13 Jun 18, 2009, 2:30:45 PM

Your logos are a unique type of design, so it's rather hard to critique when one does not see much of it. I will do my best, by critiquing what I see in this lone image and what I feel about it, as it is not my expertise in art.

The colours look very well blended, and the texture added on to it really makes it pop. The letters have a lovely fluidity, yet sharpness to them, making it clean and crisp.

I think that the 'A' should be more clearly defined, though. The heart shape that puts the bar in the A is what slightly detracts from it. The 'M' is clearly visible, however, the A sorta looks like and upside down 'V'. That's the only bit I would really fix on this.
The circle design for this logo actually works better than a square or fully deigned piece.
Lovely work!

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~sheitonakomad2 Dec 22, 2011

Beautiful. I just got tired, does the color of his eyes? You learn to tell me why did you choose this color?
The question can not be bothered

`Lilyas Dec 22, 2011 Professional Interface Designer

His eyes???

~sheitonakomad2 Dec 22, 2011

No. My eyes

~asiapasek Nov 26, 2011 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

beautiful!

~stopandpawn Jul 30, 2011

The dragon comment was on someone else's sorry. I am copying an pasting for each person to save time, but I really do like your logo.

~stopandpawn Jul 30, 2011

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