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Thanks for your great feedback and support on this design! I now did some changings on the "A" to make it more standing out. I think it's better now. The black and white versions will be flat and without textures.
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This is a commissioned logo for *mimico1981, I was asked to do the initials "AM" in purple and pink. This is what I came up with. Feedback is much appreciated!



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:iconspazzydragon13:
Your logos are a unique type of design, so it's rather hard to critique when one does not see much of it. I will do my best, by critiquing what I see in this lone image and what I feel about it, as it is not my expertise in art.

The colours look very well blended, and the texture added on to it really makes it pop. The letters have a lovely fluidity, yet sharpness to them, making it clean and crisp.

I think that the 'A' should be more clearly defined, though. The heart shape that puts the bar in the A is what slightly detracts from it. The 'M' is clearly visible, however, the A sorta looks like and upside down 'V'. That's the only bit I would really fix on this.
The circle design for this logo actually works better than a square or fully deigned piece.
Lovely work!
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:iconyueko-sama:
Wow this is really cool!

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That is so incredibly beautiful and in my favorite colors, too! This could also be MA for MythArcana!! :D Now I'm jealous!! Stunning design and it's quite eye catching! Superb all around!

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:iconelandria:
Very pretty! I do love beautiful typography though :nod:

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That's really pretty and I like the different shades of purple.

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:iconmyszt:
Hey those are my initials :) Hahahah. Maybe I should make the exact same commission in the future, because it's fantastic
:iconjaded-zero:
Very ornate. The textures you use are amazing. It looks like the crest on a shield!
:iconftourini:
That's lovely Lily! :D could you give some information on what type of client is it? its always nice to have a small description to accompany the logo in order the viewer to understand the style/colors used :giggle:

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:iconbab-jane:
I think it looks great but we don't really recognize the A very well. The M is ok. But in general it's a very good idea and it looks awesome for a logo!

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:iconmongkih:
owh waw, visually this is some pretty colored logo i ought to say, but if you're gonna use it for the mass printing process and in a minimum size, (lets put it about 1 - 2.5 CM), seems like the details won't come up precisely as how you put it, maybe you could come up with the 2 - 3 colored vector version to cover it up :D :dance:
after all, as usual, it's a wonderful piece of art from you ^_^
i love how you play with the textures and colors :)

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:iconmimico1981:
Hi,

I commissioned the logo from Lily. She has an amazing talent and i loved her work. I am a photographer and fashion designer and i wanted the logo for my cards, website etc. Its amazing. The colours used are my favourite colours.

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