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Lilyas Logo by Lilyas Lilyas Logo by Lilyas
I am working on a new web design for myself and thought about a suitable logo to start with. I know this design is more an artwork than a logo but I think it can be easily reduced to very few colors and simplier shapes. I am not sure if I will incorporate this one but so far I like it. These are my initials L.S. for Lily Seidel.

PLEASE, if you have some helpful thoughts about this design advise me of them! What do you like in it, what would you change? Any critical feedback is welcome!

EDIT: Wow, thanks for the numerous comments so far! There are many interesting aspects for improvement. But I have to mention (since many people criticized it) that the "Lilyas" writing is more meant as a signature/watermark and doesn't really belong to the artwork!


This is a vectorbased design completely done in Photoshop CS3.


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© Copyright by Lily A. Seidel 2009. All rights reserved. You may not use my work without my written permission.
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I like the look of this piece. The color scheme works very well. I like the fact that it's a bit whimsical. But I don't think it will work as a logo. Perhaps if you simplified the forms a bit. You will loose most of the detail you've obviously put a lot of effort into if you scale it down too much. The forms are good though. I think it's an excellent start. The letters themselves could easily be self-contained. If you want "Lilyas" in there, I'd also figure-out another way to work that out. Maybe the "SL" with the name underneath? Kepp playing with it. :)
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It's a very nice design, no doubt about that. But would it work as logo? Honestly, I think for a logo that this may be a bit too much.
You'll have to take into consideration, that this logo will also be used for print like on a business card. And if it was up to me, I would try designing a logo that I could afford to print as well as use it in other mediums (ie. use a set number of colours like 5 max, etc). The fact also remains, if you're going to use this as a sign-off on your printed artworks, whether this would stand out more than the artwork itself or will it be completely hidden against a multi-coloured artwork.
My advise would be to stick to something simple and something that would work in all mediums :) Good luck.
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bornforeducation Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student Interface Designer
can u please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please make a logo for me too.......name: invader and i want the theme to be orange-black with few hd wallpapers please please please please please please please please
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Lilyas Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
What would you be willing to pay?
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xzendor7 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012   Digital Artist
Impressive and Enchanting
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aranruth Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
It's great :)
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MzKitty45601 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love it. My initial too. (Sarah)
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Fun-Dipp Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
OH MAI GODS, L AND S ARE MY INITIALS TOO!!!!
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Kseksaka Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Very Great :D
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rixlauren Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
very nice
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takir29 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
awesome design may you plzz make the design of this word OnaBil Adda using the same design as u did for S and send me to takir29@yahoo.com thank you very much
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The-Love-Letter Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
This looks amazing!
I am just starting in photoshop, illustration and indesign for college!
I'm inspired by this work.
One day, I want to make something like this!
Unfortunantly, I have no idea how to do something like this, yet.
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