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I am working on a new web design for myself and thought about a suitable logo to start with. I know this design is more an artwork than a logo but I think it can be easily reduced to very few colors and simplier shapes. I am not sure if I will incorporate this one but so far I like it. These are my initials L.S. for Lily Seidel.

PLEASE, if you have some helpful thoughts about this design advise me of them! What do you like in it, what would you change? Any critical feedback is welcome!

EDIT: Wow, thanks for the numerous comments so far! There are many interesting aspects for improvement. But I have to mention (since many people criticized it) that the "Lilyas" writing is more meant as a signature/watermark and doesn't really belong to the artwork!


This is a vectorbased design completely done in Photoshop CS3.


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© Copyright by Lily A. Seidel 2009. All rights reserved. You may not use my work without my written permission.
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Critique by ~one-tough-one Jun 30, 2009, 1:56:32 AM
What about incorporating a Lily (flower) into the Lilyas logo...

Or maybe adding all of the letters so that you have a true Lilyas logo...

I like your choice of colors and the mirror reflection in the bottom part of the image...

But there does appear to be to much of a void in the bottom of the image (it would be good to even out the top and the bottom)...

I know that you have Lilyas in the image but maybe making Lilyas totally visible in the image would be a good thing...

Overall it is a good image but it could do with some improvement...

I will be interested in seeing what you come up with in the future :)
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Critique by *bluesman219 Jun 27, 2009, 7:33:35 PM
I really like this design Lily but if I was to make one observation it would be that the ribbon wrapped around the L draws the eye away from the main part of your logo. The first thing I focused on was the S shaped ribbon.
It seems the L should be more prominent maybe putting your Lilyas insignia on the L.
I do like the reflective feel you've given this image. It really highlights the logo itself.
Just a thought Lily.
Overall I believe your once again showing your talent as an artist and a ability to be very creative.
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~erraticstudios Sep 21, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist

wow, this is really gorgeous! it's very clean, i love the design, especially the reflection. well done! :clap:
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~bd670816 Aug 23, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
very nice design
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~vickyinder Jun 12, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
very nice design
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~Ankelwar Jun 5, 2010
It's so nice!! :love:
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~nalass May 29, 2010
great
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~temudjin1155 Apr 20, 2010
Beautiful and relaxing to watch :)
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~sonalibunny Feb 12, 2010
excuse me m new here but can u pls tell me something i love ur thing n i want T instead of L for one reason can u plssss help me!!!??
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`Lilyas Feb 12, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Hm, yes, I can help you. But usually people have to commission me.
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~Megonondo Dec 25, 2009
i really love this
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Mood: Love ~PabloPicasso2006 Dec 16, 2009
Looks awesome :) I was reading some critiques, and I have to agree the blue ribbon draws alot of attention. First thing that caught my eye. I thought it was SL until I read further.

Awesome none the less! XD Keep up the amazing work.
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