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Lilyas Logo by Lilyas Lilyas Logo by Lilyas
I am working on a new web design for myself and thought about a suitable logo to start with. I know this design is more an artwork than a logo but I think it can be easily reduced to very few colors and simplier shapes. I am not sure if I will incorporate this one but so far I like it. These are my initials L.S. for Lily Seidel.

PLEASE, if you have some helpful thoughts about this design advise me of them! What do you like in it, what would you change? Any critical feedback is welcome!

EDIT: Wow, thanks for the numerous comments so far! There are many interesting aspects for improvement. But I have to mention (since many people criticized it) that the "Lilyas" writing is more meant as a signature/watermark and doesn't really belong to the artwork!


This is a vectorbased design completely done in Photoshop CS3.


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© Copyright by Lily A. Seidel 2009. All rights reserved. You may not use my work without my written permission.
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I like the look of this piece. The color scheme works very well. I like the fact that it's a bit whimsical. But I don't think it will work as a logo. Perhaps if you simplified the forms a bit. You will loose most of the detail you've obviously put a lot of effort into if you scale it down too much. The forms are good though. I think it's an excellent start. The letters themselves could easily be self-contained. If you want "Lilyas" in there, I'd also figure-out another way to work that out. Maybe the "SL" with the name underneath? Kepp playing with it. :)
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It's a very nice design, no doubt about that. But would it work as logo? Honestly, I think for a logo that this may be a bit too much.
You'll have to take into consideration, that this logo will also be used for print like on a business card. And if it was up to me, I would try designing a logo that I could afford to print as well as use it in other mediums (ie. use a set number of colours like 5 max, etc). The fact also remains, if you're going to use this as a sign-off on your printed artworks, whether this would stand out more than the artwork itself or will it be completely hidden against a multi-coloured artwork.
My advise would be to stick to something simple and something that would work in all mediums :) Good luck.
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erraticstudios Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist

wow, this is really gorgeous! it's very clean, i love the design, especially the reflection. well done! :clap:
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bd670816 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
very nice design
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vickyinder Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
very nice design
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Ankelwar Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010
It's so nice!! :love:
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nalass Featured By Owner May 29, 2010
great
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temudjin1155 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010
Beautiful and relaxing to watch :)
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sonalibunny Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2010
excuse me m new here but can u pls tell me something i love ur thing n i want T instead of L for one reason can u plssss help me!!!??
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Lilyas Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2010  Professional General Artist
Hm, yes, I can help you. But usually people have to commission me.
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Megonondo Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2009
i really love this
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PabloPicasso2006 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks awesome :) I was reading some critiques, and I have to agree the blue ribbon draws alot of attention. First thing that caught my eye. I thought it was SL until I read further.

Awesome none the less! XD Keep up the amazing work.
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